Just A Little Note…

18 Jan

This just popped into my head – don’t even bother to ask me where the hell it came from, either, okay?  I was minding my own business and marinating after a nice meal of fried chicken with broccoli and cheese…

My darling,

Last night, we made love.  Ah, my sweet love, it was so tender, so fulfilling; my memories of those very passionate moments are still so very fresh in my mind.  I knew from the first moment we met that we could – and would – have many such nights as the one we had last night; you are such a pleasure and a joy to make love to.

I love the way you taste, the way you feel; I love the sounds you make and the way your body moves when you’re caught in the throes of orgasm, dying the little death over and over as our bodies move together so smoothly.  My most exciting moment was when I flooded you with my seed, to see that momentary look of surprise on your face when you felt me release, which changed to one of the most blissful looks I’ve ever seen on a woman’s face.  Our shared afterglow infused us, penetrated us to our very cores as we drifted off to sleep the sleep of the innocent.

That was last night, though.  Tonight, I want to fuck you; I want to introduce you to the lust you generate in me, that raw, animal passion that, when we make love, I cannot bring to the bed.  I want to take you, as only a man – your man – can take you; instead of teasing and tantalizing you with tender touches and kisses, I want you to feel the power of my beast when it’s fully unleashed.  I don’t want you to ease into those delicious feelings from last night – I want this to be a head-on collision, a train wreck, an emotional experience that you’ll not forget any time soon.

Because I love you; I desire you always.  I want to devour you, to eat you alive, to bury you in thoughts, feelings, and other sensations that will just overload your mind, body, and soul.  No playing around; no teasing; no instructions on what to do, when to do it – none of that gentle stuff because I don’t want to be gentle:  I want to ravish and ravage you and leave you lying there spent and exhausted; sated but  confused… but knowing along the way that this is the monster you’ve created – and as the old folks say, the chickens have come home to roost.

And, no – the truck that will hit you tonight has no license plate – but you will know who was driving it.

I’m not going to give you the benefit of letting you know what I’m going to do, no more than what I’ve already said and the beast within me says I’ve said too much already.  You know I will never do anything to hurt you… but I’m being fair by telling you that I will have you… I will take you and slake my lust against your hot flesh.  No candles; no incense; no songs of love playing in the background and bearing witness to our act of love.  No, my queen, she who holds my heart, I am taking you to the primal jungle where I truly live because you have, with your love, inspired me to be all the man I can be…

And tonight… tonight you will reap the fruits of your labor.  I will worship your body; I will cherish the precious gift of it… but with the unbridled lust that dwells inside of me:  You will know, now and for all time, that you have been fucked as only the man who loves you can fuck you.  The beast will be happy as I spill into you, raging when it feels your fingers gouging my flesh as the little death comes to take you one last time, your body convulsing, your mind in tatters, your breathing strained and ragged as your release rips through your body, searing your nervous system and threatening to bring the darkness.

I will look at you in this moment because I do love you and always want to do right by you in this and to insure that, yes, my love, you’re doing just fine.  With great reluctance, I will withdraw myself from your body – I do so love being inside you and this time isn’t any different from any other time you’ve allowed me the privilege to know you in the most carnal of ways.

It pains me – yet thrills me – to let you know that tonight, it’s not about what you want or how you want it.  Oh, I will do all the things you love for me to do and then some – I’m just going to do them my way tonight, that’s all.  Am I being selfish?  Greedy?  No, I don’t really think so because, after all, you were the one who said I need to let myself go, to be more in touch with my inner self.

You’ll ask me what has gotten into me and the answer is oh, so, simple:  You have – you have always lived within me in all your womanly glory.  I will smile, run my finger along one still-rigid nipple and, yes, a part of me will laugh with delight to see your body shiver at my touch.

And then, my most precious love, we will begin again… because tonight we fuck and I let the beast have its way with you – we can make love again tomorrow…

Whatcha think?  Steamy?  Too over the top?  Not over the top enough?  Kinda not exactly romantic?  I now know this little “note” popped into my head because of a similar thing I read in “The Pussy Whisperers.”  The author’s writing wasn’t bad, mind you, but I think my subconscious wanted to come up with “the other side” of this particular equation.

We make this distinction between fucking and making love; the author wrote about making love… I wanted to write a little something about fucking – and without being all that explicit (which ain’t like me at all)!  What do you think – did I get the message across?


Posted by on 18 January 2012 in Life, Living and Loving


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7 responses to “Just A Little Note…

  1. Lafemmeroar

    18 January 2012 at 18:43

    You got the steamy message across. I like the truck analogy … it’s letting her know that the crash will be nothing but pleasurable …


    • kdaddy23

      18 January 2012 at 19:31

      Thank you for that; I’m having one of those, “I really wrote that?” moments…


  2. bellacoils

    18 January 2012 at 19:30

    Yea, definitely steamy…great visuals! If someone wrote me a note like that, they can have me any way they want ;). Good thing I get your emails, because you’ll get me in trouble clicking on your blog at work…lol


    • kdaddy23

      18 January 2012 at 20:11

      Yeah, ya might not want to be reading me at work, Bella – there’s really no telling what might pop up on the screen and I’d feel horrible if it got you into trouble. Really weird – I can’t stop reading it… and I wrote it!


  3. Writing Jobs

    19 January 2012 at 00:13

    This was an excellent post. I enjoy reading your blog very much.

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