Larry Archer, in his blog – http://larryarcher.wordpress.com/2013/12/14/i-saw-mommy-sucking-santa-claus/ – invited us to download this book and read it… so I did and I promised Larry I’d say a few words about it… so I’m about to do that.
I have to say that for a short story, it had a lot of action crammed into a small space; Larry, in the whole book, there was other stuff in it that was longer than the story you wrote – what’s up with that? When I read that the characters could easily pass for high-class porn stars, I had to smile because as a writer, it’s kinda cool to construct a world where all the women are voluptuous and super-sexy and the men are all virile, big-dicked studs.
I liked the way all the hot, sexy action was taking place all at the same time, not quite ‘predictable’ as one would normally find in such writings but it was nice; I would have had the third woman riding Santa’s face while the other two worked him over – and just because I could and, yeah, it would have made the story hotter (just my opinion, Larry).
All in all, it wasn’t bad… but I’m still wondering what Santa left them under the tree after the girls proved they were both naught and nice!